Here I will keep a list of works I have listened to/scores I have studied which have some relevance to my thesis. I will post a reflection on each once I have had a chance to look at/listen to them.
- Stravinsky: Histoire du Soldat
- Saariaho: Lichtbogen
- Schoenberg: Survivor from Warsaw
- William Walton: Facades
- Wagner: Tristan und Isolde (overture)
- Prokofiev: Peter and the Wolf
- Copland: Lincoln Portrait
- Tobias Picker: The Encantadas
- Sibelius: The Lonely Ski Trail
- Sibelius: Snofrid
http://imslp.org/wiki/Category:Scores_featuring_a_narrator
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Friday, March 21, 2014
TIMELINE
This is the basic (and flexible) timeline for the composition and completion of my thesis:
March-May: Study/review/listen/look at scores in preparation for the aural comprehension exam
Late May: Aural comprehension exam
June:
- Official thesis proposal
- Score order
- Seating plan
- Text chosen
- Text separated into sections
- Instrumentation for each section chosen
- Interludes or no interludes?
- Beginning of piece- spoken or instrumental first?
- Duration of each section
- Overall form diagram
- Create rough draft of instrumental score for 1 part 1 interlude/prelude/postlude
- Blog posts for progress
July:
- Form diagram of each Part
- 2 parts, 2 interludes
- Prologue or Epilogue
- blog posts for progress
August:
- 2 parts, 2 interludes
- Prologue or Epilogue
- begin work on extracting instrumental parts for completed sections.
- blog posts for progress
September:
- Intermezzo
- Prelude/Postlude
- continue working on instrumental parts
- blog posts for process
October:
- extract and edit score and parts
- blog posts for process
- Begin writing supplementary document about piece
- compile bibliography
November:
- rehearsals
- continue/finish supplementary document about piece
- prepare for oral defense
MUSIC
- Instrumental prelude (Do I want this or not?)
- Prologue
- Interlude 1
- Part 1
- Interlude 2
- Part 2
- Intermezzo/interlude
- Part 3
- Interlude 3
- Part 4
- Interlude 4
- Epilogue
- Postlude (Again, not sure if I want this.)
So there are in total:
Prelude/Postlude (possibly)
Prologue/Epilogue
4 parts
4 interludes (possibly)
1 intermezzo
March-May: Study/review/listen/look at scores in preparation for the aural comprehension exam
Late May: Aural comprehension exam
June:
- Official thesis proposal
- Score order
- Seating plan
- Text chosen
- Text separated into sections
- Instrumentation for each section chosen
- Interludes or no interludes?
- Beginning of piece- spoken or instrumental first?
- Duration of each section
- Overall form diagram
- Create rough draft of instrumental score for 1 part 1 interlude/prelude/postlude
- Blog posts for progress
July:
- Form diagram of each Part
- 2 parts, 2 interludes
- Prologue or Epilogue
- blog posts for progress
August:
- 2 parts, 2 interludes
- Prologue or Epilogue
- begin work on extracting instrumental parts for completed sections.
- blog posts for progress
September:
- Intermezzo
- Prelude/Postlude
- continue working on instrumental parts
- blog posts for process
October:
- extract and edit score and parts
- blog posts for process
- Begin writing supplementary document about piece
- compile bibliography
November:
- rehearsals
- continue/finish supplementary document about piece
- prepare for oral defense
MUSIC
- Instrumental prelude (Do I want this or not?)
- Prologue
- Interlude 1
- Part 1
- Interlude 2
- Part 2
- Intermezzo/interlude
- Part 3
- Interlude 3
- Part 4
- Interlude 4
- Epilogue
- Postlude (Again, not sure if I want this.)
So there are in total:
Prelude/Postlude (possibly)
Prologue/Epilogue
4 parts
4 interludes (possibly)
1 intermezzo
Thursday, March 20, 2014
PROLOGUE
PROLOGUE
This
is the forest primeval.
The
murmuring pines and hemlocks,
Bearded
with moss, stand like druids of eld, with voices sad and prophetic.
Loud
from its rocky caverns, the deep-voiced ocean speaks,
And in
accents disconsolate answers the wail of the forest.
Waste
are those peasant farms, and the farmer forever departed!
Scattered
like dust and leaves, when mighty blasts of October seize them,
And
whirl them aloft, and sprinkle them far over the ocean.
Naught
but tradition remains of the beautiful village of Grand-Pre.
Yet ye
who believe in affection that hopes, and endures, and is patient,
Ye who
believe in the beauty and strength of woman's devotion,
List
to the mournful tradition still sung by the pines of the forest;
List
to a tale of love in Acadie, home of the happy.
OBJECTIVES
- Introduce leitmotivs
- create atmosphere
INSTRUMENTS
- marimba
- piano
- violin
- viola
- flute
- clarinet
- horn
DURATION
- 2:30
LEITMOTIVS:
- Grand-Pre- Tremolo motif in piano, oscillating like the ocean, pan-diatonic harmonies, small range (within a 7th), alternation between consonant and dissonant, slow movement from one sonority to the next.
- Clarinet melody, counterpoint with horn
- Descending 4th motif
- Acadie
- Drones in background (harmonics?),
- violin melody
- grace notes
- Evangeline
- Violin melody
- ascending fifth, then M6
- embellishments in flute, trills, etc.
- Horn, cello for harmony
- Gabriel
- Viola melody
- descending 4th, ascending 2nd.
- Clarinet embellishments with repeated note rhythms
- horn, cello for harmony
- Ocean
- horn melody, clarinet counterpoint
- harmony in cello, piano
- South
- violin melody, similar to Evangeline, more use of diminished 5th and minor 6th
- very little harmonic accompaniment
- drones and slides
- Searching/time passing
- tone passed from instrument to instrument- timbral modulation
- tremolo in strings
- rhythmic ambiguity, metric modulation and/or added values
- atonal, only fleeting use of recognizable chords and sonorities
- quiet, but with constant fluctuation in dynamics
ATMOSPHERE
- quiet, steady, misty
- all melodic voices alternate in speaking leitmotivs, little counterpoint
- harmonic voices steady in rhythm, but harmonic progression should speed and slow like waves
OTHER
- Does the ensemble play first, or does the narrator speak first?
This is the forest primeval.
The murmuring pines and hemlocks,
Bearded with moss, stand like druids of eld, with voices sad and prophetic.
Loud from its rocky caverns, the deep-voiced ocean speaks,
And in accents disconsolate answers the wail of the forest.
Seating chart
This could be fun.
I think this would be a fairly typical setup, with the voice where a singer would be if they were singing with an orchestra- alternatively, the voice could go on the right side, with the woodwinds. Right now, this diagram looks very left-heavy...I mean, the piano, strings and trumpet are on the left side...So there's also this:
I'm on the fence as to the tpt/hn and cl/fl, who should sit on the right and who should sit on the left. I like having the brass in the middle, but if I do that, the trumpet's bell is going to be pointing straight toward the audience. And with the strings and woodwinds sharing roles and themes, I think that this setting might actually be more appropriate:
There's a lot of dialogue happening between strings and brass, which relates to the Acadie vs British theme. This puts my flute and clarinet in the middle and keeps the trumpet from pointing straight out to the audience. It also has my horn across from the cello, which I like since I like having the two of them play together, same with violin and trumpet. Viola's just kind of...There, as are the woodwinds. Another alternative that I kind of like is this:
So the cello is in the middle, with flute on one side and clarinet on the other. This pairs violin with trumpet, viola with horn, flute with clarinet and has cello on its own.
...I think my seating plan will probably be in the works for a while; since I'm using the ensemble in so many different ways, the final seating plan will have to take these into consideration so that there's no moving around throughout the piece, but the players are all able to see and work with each other.
Score Order
This will likely be under development throughout my entire thesis-writing process.
I don't know why, but for some reason, I absolutely want to have the Narrator at the top of the staff, always. If there is a conductor (and I still have a feeling I'll need one), I'd think it'd be easier to see. Because while the instruments will be changing throughout the piece, the Narrator will almost always be present, except for during the interludes. For this reason, it is my belief that whenever the narrator is being used, it should be at the top of the score, to facilitate things for both the conductor and the narrator.
I've got a few possible score orders, and will post my comments on them below.
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
pno
voice
vln
vla
vlc
...First of all, I don't like that the voice is below the piano. This is probably because I'm a violinist and I like to see my line at the top. Yeh yeh, violin-diva-mentality, whatever. But it's just easier for my eyes to pick out the focal line if it's either above the piano, or at the top of the page. Thus why there's also this possibility:
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
voice
pno
vln
vla
clv
...But my brain still doesn't like seeing the voice in the middle. I also don't like seeing it below percussion, because sometimes the percussion used will need a treble and bass clef, so the voice will be sandwiched between, say, piano and marimba. And it just doesn't look nice, in my mind. So let's try throwing it up at the top.
voice
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
pno
vln
vla
vcl
So there's that, and I like that one better. It does separate the voice from the piano, which some people might not like, and yes, the piano player might read from a score- depending on how many instruments are playing- but the piano isn't going to be the most predominant instrument; I'm using it mostly to add to the bass, and occasionally to flesh out the colours and add to the texture. It's not going to be very soloistic in this. (Sorry pianists!) SO with this being the case, I've wrangled things around again:
voice
fl
cl
hn
tpt
vln
vla
vlc
perc
pno
So the voice is at the top, and the piano is at the bottom- this, for some reason, makes the mose sense in my head. The piano is being used for an accompaniment purpose in this piece, so I want it at the bottom- because it's accompanying the ensemble, not the voice in particular. The voice is somehat separate from the ensemble, hence why it is at the top, followed by the melodic instruments, leading down to percussion and piano. This is my favourite score order, but I'm going to have to look at other pieces for narrator/voice and chamber ensemble to see what other people do, and why they do it.
I don't know why, but for some reason, I absolutely want to have the Narrator at the top of the staff, always. If there is a conductor (and I still have a feeling I'll need one), I'd think it'd be easier to see. Because while the instruments will be changing throughout the piece, the Narrator will almost always be present, except for during the interludes. For this reason, it is my belief that whenever the narrator is being used, it should be at the top of the score, to facilitate things for both the conductor and the narrator.
I've got a few possible score orders, and will post my comments on them below.
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
pno
voice
vln
vla
vlc
...First of all, I don't like that the voice is below the piano. This is probably because I'm a violinist and I like to see my line at the top. Yeh yeh, violin-diva-mentality, whatever. But it's just easier for my eyes to pick out the focal line if it's either above the piano, or at the top of the page. Thus why there's also this possibility:
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
voice
pno
vln
vla
clv
...But my brain still doesn't like seeing the voice in the middle. I also don't like seeing it below percussion, because sometimes the percussion used will need a treble and bass clef, so the voice will be sandwiched between, say, piano and marimba. And it just doesn't look nice, in my mind. So let's try throwing it up at the top.
voice
fl
cl
hn
tpt
perc
pno
vln
vla
vcl
So there's that, and I like that one better. It does separate the voice from the piano, which some people might not like, and yes, the piano player might read from a score- depending on how many instruments are playing- but the piano isn't going to be the most predominant instrument; I'm using it mostly to add to the bass, and occasionally to flesh out the colours and add to the texture. It's not going to be very soloistic in this. (Sorry pianists!) SO with this being the case, I've wrangled things around again:
voice
fl
cl
hn
tpt
vln
vla
vlc
perc
pno
So the voice is at the top, and the piano is at the bottom- this, for some reason, makes the mose sense in my head. The piano is being used for an accompaniment purpose in this piece, so I want it at the bottom- because it's accompanying the ensemble, not the voice in particular. The voice is somehat separate from the ensemble, hence why it is at the top, followed by the melodic instruments, leading down to percussion and piano. This is my favourite score order, but I'm going to have to look at other pieces for narrator/voice and chamber ensemble to see what other people do, and why they do it.
Text
One of the first parts to composing my thesis is definitely choosing which excerpts from the text I want to use. "Evangeline" is HUGE, which means I've had to read through it a few times in order to get a general sense of the story so I can pick and choose the text I want to use. Right now, I know I've got more text than I'll likely use- but I can cut out bits as I work away, rather than having to go back and add some in...If it comes to that, then fine, but for right now, I think I've got more than enough.
I've chosen excerpts which help to best portray the story, excluding some sections here and there since the general gist of the plot can be gathered from what I've chosen. There are some parts I've left about- actually, there's a lot that I've left out- but the frame of the story is there. We get the setting, a bit of detail about the two main characters, the plot and the inevitable arrival of the British who make everything go crazy, and then Evangeline's search for Gabriel which emcompasses the vast majority of the poem...So I've narrowed that down quite a bit. I've also separated it into sections, so that I can have a tone for each of them represented in the music. Again, these are flexible and will change/have already changed as I've worked on them.
The text I've chosen is as follows:
Waste are those peasant farms, and the farmer forever departed!
Yet ye who believe in affection that hopes, and endures, and is patient,
PART I
In the Acadian land, on the shores of the Basin of Minas,
Fair was she to behold, that maid of seventeen summers.
But among all who came, young Gabriel was only welcome;
Under the open sky, in the odorous air of the orchard,
And Lo! With a summons sonorous sounded the bell from its tower,
“You are convened this day by his majesty's orders.
There disorder prevailed, and the tumult and stir of embarking,
Lo! With a mournful sound, like the voice of a vast congregation,
PART III
Many a weary year had passed since the burning of Grand-Pre
Long among them was seen a maiden who waited and wandered,
And the soul of the maiden wandered along, and she cried
Day after day the maiden followed his flying steps,
PART IV
Slowly, slowly, slowly, the day succeeded each other,
Thus, on a sabbath morn she entered the door of the almshouse.
Suddenly, as if arrested by fear or a feeling of wonder,
As in the days of her youth, Evangeline rose in his vision
All was ended now, the hope, the fear, and the sorrow.
Still stands the forest primeval; but far away from its shadow
Still stands the forest primeval, but under the shade of its branches
I've chosen excerpts which help to best portray the story, excluding some sections here and there since the general gist of the plot can be gathered from what I've chosen. There are some parts I've left about- actually, there's a lot that I've left out- but the frame of the story is there. We get the setting, a bit of detail about the two main characters, the plot and the inevitable arrival of the British who make everything go crazy, and then Evangeline's search for Gabriel which emcompasses the vast majority of the poem...So I've narrowed that down quite a bit. I've also separated it into sections, so that I can have a tone for each of them represented in the music. Again, these are flexible and will change/have already changed as I've worked on them.
The text I've chosen is as follows:
PROLOGUE
This
is the forest primeval.
The
murmuring pines and hemlocks,
Bearded
with moss, stand like druids of eld, with voices sad and prophetic.
Loud
from its rocky caverns, the deep-voiced ocean speaks,
And
in accents disconsolate answers the wail of the forest.
Waste are those peasant farms, and the farmer forever departed!
Scattered
like dust and leaves, when mighty blasts of October seize them,
And
whirl them aloft, and sprinkle them far over the ocean.
Naught
but tradition remains of the beautiful village of Grand-Pre.
Yet ye who believe in affection that hopes, and endures, and is patient,
Ye
who believe in the beauty and strength of woman's devotion,
List
to the mournful tradition still sung by the pines of the forest;
List
to a tale of love in Acadie, home of the happy.
PART I
In the Acadian land, on the shores of the Basin of Minas,
Distant, secluded, still, the
little village of Grand-Pre lay in the fruitful valley.
Somewhat apart from the
village, Benedict Bellefontaine, the wealthiest farmer of Grand-Pre
dwelt on his goodly acres;
and with him, directing his
household, gentle Evangeline lived,
His child, and the pride of
the village.
Fair was she to behold, that maid of seventeen summers.
Many a youth fixed his eyes
upon her, as the saint of his deepest devotion.
Many a suitor came to her
door, by the darkness befriended,
and knew not which beat
louder, his heart or the knocker of iron,
But among all who came, young Gabriel was only welcome;
Gabriel Lajeunesse, the son of
Basil the Blacksmith.
He was a valiant youth, and
his face, like the face of morning,
Gladdened the earth with its
light.
Evangeline was a woman now,
with the heart and hopes of a woman.
Under the open sky, in the odorous air of the orchard,
Bending with golden fruit, was
spread the feast of betrothal.
There in the shade of the
porch were the priest and notary seated;
there good Benedict sat, and
sturdy Basil the blacksmith.
Fairest of all the maids was
Evangeline, Benedict's daughter!
Noblest of all the youths was
Gabriel, son of the blacksmith!
PART
II
And Lo! With a summons sonorous sounded the bell from its tower,
and over the meadows a drum
beat.
Then came the guard from the
ships, and marching proudly among them
entered the sacred portal.
Then uprose their commander,
and spake from the altar,
holding aloft in his hands,
with its seals, the royal commission.
“You are convened this day by his majesty's orders.
All your lands, and dwellings,
and cattle of all kinds
forfeited be to the crown; and
that you yourselves from this province
be transported to other lands.
God grant you dwell there ever
as faithful as subjects,
a happy and peaceable people.
Prisoners I now declare you;
for such is his Majesty's pleasure!”
There disorder prevailed, and the tumult and stir of embarking,
Busy piled the freighted
boats,
and in the confusion wives
were torn from husbands,
and mothers, too late, saw
their children left on the land, extending their arms, with wildest
entreaties.
So unto separate ships were
Basil and Gabriel carried,
while in despair on the shore
Evangeline stood.
Lo! With a mournful sound, like the voice of a vast congregation,
Solemnly answered the sea, and
mingled its roar with the dirges.
And with the ebb of that tide
the ships sailed our of the harbour,
Leaving behind them the dead
on the shore, and the village in ruins.
PART III
Many a weary year had passed since the burning of Grand-Pre
when on the falling tide the
freighted vessels departed,
bearing a nation into exile,
exile without an end.
Scattered were they, like
flakes of snow.
From the cold lakes of the
North to the sultry Southern savannas.
Long among them was seen a maiden who waited and wandered,
lowly and meek in spirit and
patiently suffering all things.
Sometimes she lingered in
towns, sometimes in churchyards strayed,
and gazed upon the crosses and
tombstones,
sat by some nameless grave,
and thought perhaps in its bosom
he was already at rest, and
she longed to slumber beside him.
And the soul of the maiden wandered along, and she cried
“O Gabriel, O my beloved,
art thou so near unto me, yet
I cannot behold thee?
Art thou so near unto me, and
yet thy voice does not reach me?
When shall these eyes behold,
these arms be folded about thee?”
Day after day the maiden followed his flying steps,
sometime she saw, or thought
she saw, the smoke of his campfire,
but at nightfall she found
only embers and ashes.
PART IV
Slowly, slowly, slowly, the day succeeded each other,
days and weeks and months,
so came the autumn and passed,
and the winter yet Gabriel came not.
Blossomed the opening spring,
yet Gabriel came not.
Thus did the long, sad years
glide on,
Each year stole something away
from her beauty,
But Gabriel was not forgotten.
Within her heart was his image
into her thoughts of him time
had not entered.
Thus, on a sabbath morn she entered the door of the almshouse.
Noiselessly she moved about
the assiduous, careful attendants,
moistening the feverish lip,
the aching brow, ad in silence,
closing the sightless eyes of
the dead.
Many a languid head, upraised
as Evangeline entered,
turned on its pillow of pain
to gaze while she passed,
For her presence fell on their
hearts like a ray of sun on the walls of a prison.
Suddenly, as if arrested by fear or a feeling of wonder,
Still she stood.
On the pallet before her was
stretched the form of an old man.
Long and thin, and gray were
his locks that shaded his temples,
But as he lay in the morning
light, his face for a moment
seemed to assume once more the
form of its earlier manhood.
As in the days of her youth, Evangeline rose in his vision
years came into his eyes; and
slowly he lifted his eyelids.
Vainly he strove to whisper
her name, for the accents unuttered
died on his lips.
Vainly he strove to rise, and
Evangeline, kneeling beside him,
kissed his dying lips and laid
her head on his bosom.
All was ended now, the hope, the fear, and the sorrow.
All the aching heart, the
restless, unsatisfied longing.
All the dull, deep pain, and
constant anguish of patience.
And, as she pressed once more
the lifeless head to her bosom,
Meekly she bowed her own and
muttered “Father, I thank thee.”
EPILOGUE
Still stands the forest primeval; but far away from its shadow
side by side, in their
nameless graves, the lovers are sleeping.
Under the humble walls of the
little churchyard
In the heart of the city they
lie, unknown and unnoticed.
Still stands the forest primeval, but under the shade of its branches
dwells another race, with
other customs and languages.
Only along the shore of the
mournful and misty Atlantic
Linger a few Acadian peasants.
In the fisherman's cot the
wheel and loom are still busy;
Maidens by the evening fire
repeat Evangeline's story
While from its rocky caverns
the deep-voiced ocean
speaks, and in accents
disconsolate, answers the wail of the forest.
...So there's still lots there to work with. Honestly, I've already got music written for a few parts of this- I'm behind on my blogging, obviously, and I've got a lot of catching up to do, especially with reference to the instrumentation, score order, seating plan, leitmotivs, influential composers/pieces, etc. etc. etc. But that'll all come soon!
Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Thesis.
Thesis. It's a monster.
I've been told a few times by different people that the difficult part of doing a thesis isn't the composition process, but the process of writing about it afterwards. I've been told several times that for most composers, this is the hard part- writing about their own work. I don't think I've ever had issues with this in the past, but I figured- that's probably because I tend to keep a fairly good record of what's going through my head while I write. I plan and plan and plan and plan, and then start composing- with reference to the plans I've made, sketches I've drawn, etc. I reflect a lot, so I generally have a decent idea of what's going on when I write music...But just in case this thesis is any different, I've decided to keep track of stuff here. It's not going to be professional, it might not be witty or enlightening, BUT it'll hopefully help me in the long run when I actually have to sit down and defend why I wrote what I dun writ.
SO: What is it?
I am taking certain lines from Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's epic poem "Evangeline," and set it to music. I'd like it to be narrated, and possibly sometimes sung, when appropriate- but I'm not sure I want it to be sung in an opera-esque style. The ensemble will be a modified chamber ensemble, and will use some Acadian/Maritime folk tunes but I will probably disguise them so they're not blatantly apparent. That's it in a nutshell- I've already begun working on it and will continue to do so and post more details in the future.
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